This is the video we created! we have learnt that using similar angles for each shot takes away the realism of the piece. We now know to make shots different to ensure the piece runs smoothly. Using these similar shots creates jump cuts and makes the sequence jolty.  However, we did use some different shots, such as mid shots to close ups, which created realism.

Also, we haven't used any special transitions, except from a fade in at the beginning, because we wanted the piece to be as natural as possible. 

Another thing which we could have improved was the poor sound. As each shot was taken, different sounds could be heard in the background which takes away the involvement of the audience from the piece. Therefore, when we film we will make sure to perform any dialogue in quiet locations.

   Beckie, Lyndsay & Ash